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All Deviations
All Deviations




There was a time in my life where you were my everything.
Angels with one half wing and the other just a little too beaten.
Cheery hellos and tearful goodbyes could never get me.
I couldn't stay where the hatred would force itself to the outside.

This isn't like myself, I don't do this.

People of my past told me there's a time and place for all things.
You caught me at the wrong time, in a place I didn't want to be.
The sun rose and set with your name in a whisper,
dawn and dusk came and went with your face still with me.

I...can't... love you again.

A point where love becomes sacrifice, sacrifice becomes desperation.
Desperation told me to let you go, each day I kept falling more.
With dreams reoccuring of your love I never felt was for me,
I decided to leave, against the will of myself and yours.

Why did you let me do this...

There was a time in my life where you were my everything.
Tears on my pillow froze and cracked as ice.
A heart not quite broken struggles holding up the other half.
With half pleasant sighs and smiles so forced they bleed,

I left you, and it's killing me inside.
©2004-2008 ~TormentedSorrows
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I don't know whether I want you back or if I don't. It's so hard...




=( *confused*
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~JenniferStarling:iconJenniferStarling: May 26, 2004, 5:34:56 PM
brilliant!

:clap::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap:

:police: Drag me away for overuse of emoticons.

:cries::runnynose::sprint:

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~TormentedSorrows:iconTormentedSorrows: May 26, 2004, 5:35:47 PM
ahahaha Yeah but they were cute and made me feel good =D thank you

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~Emasery:iconEmasery: May 26, 2004, 5:44:59 PM
"You caught me at the wrong time, in a place I didn't want to be." amazing line! genraly amazing :+fav: i like the fact u deside at the end aswell SuPA COoL!! :lick:
~onecrazymofo:icononecrazymofo: May 26, 2004, 6:02:17 PM
wow - such a great poem but then again what did I expect from you - some of the lines just knocked me to the floor:
Tears on my pillow froze and cracked as ice.
A heart not quite broken struggles holding up the other half.
With half pleasant sighs and smiles so fake they bleed,


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~TormentedSorrows:iconTormentedSorrows: May 26, 2004, 6:21:02 PM
Thank you darling :hug:

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~TormentedSorrows:iconTormentedSorrows: May 26, 2004, 6:21:51 PM
=D thank you love, unfortunately, this is one of my only poems that are true to my life.

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~onecrazymofo:icononecrazymofo: May 26, 2004, 6:23:12 PM
:smooch:

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`Myangelofmusic:iconMyangelofmusic: May 26, 2004, 10:25:14 PM
Excellent expression of emotion... you really know how to do this...

Tears on my pillow froze and cracked as ice.

oh god :faint:

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~Jomina:iconJomina: May 27, 2004, 2:14:40 AM
take me back, PLEASE!!

omg i love this hon. omg omg omg

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~TormentedSorrows:iconTormentedSorrows: May 27, 2004, 3:44:17 AM
hahaha Thank you so much sweetie =D

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